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9月3日作文真题写作思路

2005-09-05

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9月3日作文真题写作思路分析

 来源:环球教育www.ielts.com.cn 2005-9-5



    Topic: 9月3日A类大作文真题

    Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?

    写作思路:

    文章着重讨论贫富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解决问题能力也不同,普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更强。

    态度:同意
    论点一:Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.

    论据:对待玩具的不同---more responsible,对待学习的不同-----more independent,帮助家庭工作---more responsible and independent 

    论点二:Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.
    论据:普通人家出身孩子对待改变人生的态度和出身富家孩子的对比

    让步段论点:But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.

    结论:总结之前的提到的主要观点 

    总结:这篇文章需要考生会设身处地考虑出身不同的孩子长大后如何用不同的方式态度对待生活中问题。在考试或者练习写作的时候尽量学会使用生活中普通的例子说明支持自己的观点。

    重点词汇:

    factor
    critical
    empirically
    adulthood
    well-off
    household
    problem-solving 
    fancy
    babysit
    upbringing
    affluent
    donate
    over-protected
    harsh
    entrepreneurs
    accomplish
    privilege
    cope with


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