苏州环球教育钟怿老师为大家带来雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析。一起来看。

　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】表格图

　　【作文题目】: The bar chart below shows the global sales of four types of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

　　Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

　　【综合点评】

　　这篇柱形图(bar chart)描述的是四个类别的电子游戏的销售额在2000年到2006年的变化。考试具体数字会和图表中略有差异，不过图表整体趋势和考试一致。

　　参考范文：

　　This bar chart depicts the sales of four types of video games worldwide between 2000 and 2006.

　　In terms of the sales of game A, it came with highest revenue and showed an obvious upward trend from 2000 to 2006. The sales figure started with 5 billion dollars in 2000 and surged to 8 billion dollars in 2006 albeit there was a slight drop in the year 2003.

　　Contrarily, regarding game B, it showed a downward trend in general, declining from 4 billion dollars to only 2.5 billion dollars during the same years, and in the last two reporting years, this figure remained un-changed.

　　With regards to game c and d, they both showed a similar upward trend, especially between 2002 and 2005 when the sales of game d accounted for half as much as that of game c. To be noticed, in the first two report-ing years, game d had not been sold on the market and in 2001, there was a minimal sales figure in game c with only 1 billion dollars. By 2006, the sales of games c and d caught up with that of game b with a total revenue worthy approximately 2.5 billion dollars.

　　In conclusion, it can be seen that type a, c and d games all showed an upward trend in the sales, whereas only game b experienced a market slump. (228)

　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】Some people believe that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens lose to the city centers with apartment buildings where commuters can live, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　【题目分析】这是一道讨论题，对于长句解读有困难的同学而言，容易理解错误。注意traveling to work 这里是上班途中的意思，如果理解为旅游那么这道题必然偏题。

　　【题材类别】社会类

　　【参考范文】

　　Commuting long distances to work has always been a hassle to city people, particularly during peak hours at daytime. To re-duce the traffic time, replacing the space-occupying parks or gardens in the inner city with residential apartments offers a possible solution. However, personally, this bold idea still deserves more meticulous de-liberation on its true effectiveness in reducing the commuting troubles.

　　Undeniably, this effective apply of inner city space can pull people`s residence closer to the working place so as to reduce the road distance to work. This saves the waiting among crowds to take commuting tools as well as to reduce the traffic hours into the intensive road sec-tions which connect the workplace. Taking people who live in the suburban area in Beijing as an example, they normally spend hours on busy traffic to reach their companies located in the inner city zones which is a terrible start to a day`s work.

　　However, the dense inner city with clusters of residential buildings would also raise even more foreseeable traffic congestion which even-tually extend the commuting time the other way around. In addition, the removal of public regions like gardens and parks will eliminate the city greenery and limit the leisure spaces for public , resulting in an unattractive living environment.

　　In conclusion, considering the convenience brought to people living closer to workplace and the drawbacks coming along with the change of city environment, governments should give a considerate thought on the construction area size and maintain part of public space for the benefits of the local citizens. 261