今天给大家分析一道经典难题,题目如下:
这道题让我们描述一个去过还想再去一次的城市。大多数同学会把它说成回忆过去的经历,然后最后说一句:因为玩儿得很开心,所以想再去一次。最后得了5.5分,都不知道是什么原因。
我们重新来看一下这道题:
Describea city that you have been to and would like to visit again.
这个标题的动词运用了两个时态:have been to 现在完成时态和would like to一般将来时态。也就是说,我们在答题的过程中,是不能把过去时态作为答题主体的,将来时态的部分至少也要占50%的比重。如果是让我们描述一个过去的旅行经历,这道题会设计成“Describea city you visited that you like/dislike.”
因此,朋友们,审题太重要了。
接下来,我们看标题下面的要求,一共四个小问题,前三个是过去时态,最后一个是将来时态,让我们解释原因。
大家知道,part2话题的最后一问一般都是最重要的一问,也是我们应该在两分钟的答题过程中,花最多时间去描述的一部分。因此,将来时态绝对应该是这道题的一个主要答题时态。
在一边回忆过去的旅行经历,一边畅想下次再去一次的想象中,这道题就顺利完成了。接下来给大家分享我的答题素材。
This city is Barcelona. I went there about four years ago with my ex-boyfriend. Wevisited museums and ate some delicate local food. However, we had disagreements about whether to visit the famous Segrada Familia ornot. Eventually, we both thought we would go back to Barcelona again some time in the future, so we didn’t go to that church.It turned out to bea wrong decision because we broke up and we are never ever getting back together and I am definitely not visiting the city with him again. In spite of this unhappy ending of our story, I still want tovisit Barcelona if there is a chance in the future. It doesn’t matter if it’s in one year or five years. I would go.I want to see the Segrada Familia and I want to see a bull fight and flamenco. I want to see Spanish women dancing like there’s no tomorrow. I am crazy about the Spanish culture. There are too many things I didn’t do when I visited the city for the first time and I had some bad memories that made me can’t forget this city.I want to visit it again because I want a better memory for myself and a much better experience when I am richer and could be able to afford better hotelsand fancier food. It’s a city full of artistic elements and enthusiastic citizens. I feel I would fall in love with it again.That’s what I want to say about this topic. Thank you.
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